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BEN Drowned x Reader part 1 Messing~

              MITCH POV (Your older brother AKA)
Today was my little sister’s (Insert name) birthday. I have been waiting in my room to be called downstairs for the cake, normally I would be bored but I had company. “B4!” yelled a boy with golden hair and red eyes, with black lines descending from them. I meet this boy when I was twelve; at first he was trying to kill me. Frowning I groan in annoyance, and mutter lowly “you destroyed my last ship” The boy laughs,” Hehe! Okay Mitch! You owe me … eh just get me more clothes kay,” the boy leans back on my pillows. “Yeah yeah whatever Ben,” I wave my hands in annoyance “I swear I bet you’re cheating somehow…” Ben chuckles quietly “Nah~ Just luck and brains. Not to mention my good looks,”
                  I roll my eyes, turning on my back. Staring at the ceiling, allowing the blood to rush to my head. “My sister is turning fourteen today…” I mumble thinking of when she was just a tiny baby. “Heh how they grow fast” Ben snorts “Huh! What about me ! You didn’t think about me on my birthday dude! Freaking seventeen now! But happy birthday to your sister… maybe I’ll mess around with her …”Ben smirks, I instantly sit up and glare at him “Ben! You leave my sister alone kay.” Ben yawns,” Alright alright. King Bossy” I was so confused with Ben’s personality switches, one minute he’s acting like his age. Next minute he’s acting like a five year old “Hey Ben?” “Yeah Mitch?” “Were you dropped on your head as a baby?” I smile, Ben bursts into laughter giving me a gently push “No! haha Why would you even say that!”
                    Ten minutes pasted of total silence, Ben chuckles lowly. “Hey Mitch turn around” I wished I never turned around…
POV Reader~
               You were turning fourteen today! You were so excited and just plain happy. Even though you still felt thirteen you still had fun, your parents and cousins came over and as always your brother locks himself in his room. But it was all good because he would always wake up before the crack of dawn, so he could be the first to say,” Happy Birthday!” too you. He even got you gifts, like candy and a new video game. Today he gave you a poster of an anime you been watching for a while, Elfen Lied. Pride and happiness overwhelms you as you stare at the hot pink poster of Lucy and Nana.
                   Time to cut the cake was approaching; you walk down the hall way to see your brother. So you can tell him it was time. Your hand ready to knock his door, but you heard a voice. “Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~” “AAHUGH WHAT THE HELL BEN! TAKE THAT OFF! ARE THOSE!” you hear thrashing around “MMMMMMM! GIMME A BIIIIIIG WEEEET KISSSSSSS MITCH~~~~” that same voice replies with amusement in his voice. Your body stiffens and hand trembles, your right eye half way closed as you crocked your eyebrows. “Whaaaat….?” You softly whisper.
                   “Mitch?” you ask out, knocking the door. Silence filled the room, your brother opening the door slowly “Heheehe… sorry (Insert name) yeah?” he was clearly nervous, his shirt messy and not to mention hair. “Do you have a friend over?” you ask innocently, hoping you were just hearing things. “Um… no? Why do you ask?” he was clearing lying now! “Just wondering… Anyways it’s time to cut the cake,” “Oh alright. Come on lets go then.” He holds your hand, walking you back.
                  You look back once, you could of swore you saw something in his room…
~~~~~~~~ Time skip~~~~~~~~
        Everyone was asleep besides you. You couldn’t sleep… you were too worried about Mitch. You sink into your bed, opening your laptop. Someone was messaging you.
Cleverbot: Hey
You: Um… hi??? O.o)\
Cleverbot: Happy Birthday (Insert name)
You: ??? Mitch?
Cleverbot: Nope
You: Who is this?
Cleverbot: Ben. Ben Drowned
You: Sorry I don’t know you
Cleverbot: You should
You: Why? Did I do something?! :o
Cleverbot: no hehe but I am~
            All of a sudden a boy with blond hair and black eyes with crimson red pupils comes out of the screen. You gasp moving back, the boy chuckles at your reaction “Exactly what are you…”
“Hehe your sexy nightmare~ that’s who”
my first creepypasta fanfic :p
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KittyYOUKAI5125 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  New member Student Artist
AWWWWWW YESH!!!! >^*3*^<
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  New member
“Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~”



xD Does lines Dood Pikachu Piff Plz Pikachu Giggle Plz Pikachu-lol Stitch clap plz Bunnyclapplz 
ShindaTheKitsune Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Not a nightmare. Totally a dream.
DarkPRINCESS1015 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  New member
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  New member
"Your sexy nightmare"

*giggles* o-okay
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  New member
birthday girl: exactley who are you...

ben: hehe your sexy nightmare.... thats who

jedwa123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  New member
what the heck BEN?!? I'm 14, you're 17! I see a big problem there.... '~'
puppiesgorawr Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What did ben have???? Im so confused *-*
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student General Artist
oh r u confused when Ben was playing around with Mitch xD
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014   General Artist
BEN: *starts coming out screen* 
Me: *overly happy* I LOVE YOU ^(^o^)^
BEN: ... *slowly backs into screen*
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