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BEN Drowned x Reader part 1 Messing~

              MITCH POV (Your older brother AKA)
Today was my little sister’s (Insert name) birthday. I have been waiting in my room to be called downstairs for the cake, normally I would be bored but I had company. “B4!” yelled a boy with golden hair and red eyes, with black lines descending from them. I meet this boy when I was twelve; at first he was trying to kill me. Frowning I groan in annoyance, and mutter lowly “you destroyed my last ship” The boy laughs,” Hehe! Okay Mitch! You owe me … eh just get me more clothes kay,” the boy leans back on my pillows. “Yeah yeah whatever Ben,” I wave my hands in annoyance “I swear I bet you’re cheating somehow…” Ben chuckles quietly “Nah~ Just luck and brains. Not to mention my good looks,”
                  I roll my eyes, turning on my back. Staring at the ceiling, allowing the blood to rush to my head. “My sister is turning fourteen today…” I mumble thinking of when she was just a tiny baby. “Heh how they grow fast” Ben snorts “Huh! What about me ! You didn’t think about me on my birthday dude! Freaking seventeen now! But happy birthday to your sister… maybe I’ll mess around with her …”Ben smirks, I instantly sit up and glare at him “Ben! You leave my sister alone kay.” Ben yawns,” Alright alright. King Bossy” I was so confused with Ben’s personality switches, one minute he’s acting like his age. Next minute he’s acting like a five year old “Hey Ben?” “Yeah Mitch?” “Were you dropped on your head as a baby?” I smile, Ben bursts into laughter giving me a gently push “No! haha Why would you even say that!”
                    Ten minutes pasted of total silence, Ben chuckles lowly. “Hey Mitch turn around” I wished I never turned around…
POV Reader~
               You were turning fourteen today! You were so excited and just plain happy. Even though you still felt thirteen you still had fun, your parents and cousins came over and as always your brother locks himself in his room. But it was all good because he would always wake up before the crack of dawn, so he could be the first to say,” Happy Birthday!” too you. He even got you gifts, like candy and a new video game. Today he gave you a poster of an anime you been watching for a while, Elfen Lied. Pride and happiness overwhelms you as you stare at the hot pink poster of Lucy and Nana.
                   Time to cut the cake was approaching; you walk down the hall way to see your brother. So you can tell him it was time. Your hand ready to knock his door, but you heard a voice. “Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~” “AAHUGH WHAT THE HELL BEN! TAKE THAT OFF! ARE THOSE!” you hear thrashing around “MMMMMMM! GIMME A BIIIIIIG WEEEET KISSSSSSS MITCH~~~~” that same voice replies with amusement in his voice. Your body stiffens and hand trembles, your right eye half way closed as you crocked your eyebrows. “Whaaaat….?” You softly whisper.
                   “Mitch?” you ask out, knocking the door. Silence filled the room, your brother opening the door slowly “Heheehe… sorry (Insert name) yeah?” he was clearly nervous, his shirt messy and not to mention hair. “Do you have a friend over?” you ask innocently, hoping you were just hearing things. “Um… no? Why do you ask?” he was clearing lying now! “Just wondering… Anyways it’s time to cut the cake,” “Oh alright. Come on lets go then.” He holds your hand, walking you back.
                  You look back once, you could of swore you saw something in his room…
~~~~~~~~ Time skip~~~~~~~~
        Everyone was asleep besides you. You couldn’t sleep… you were too worried about Mitch. You sink into your bed, opening your laptop. Someone was messaging you.
Cleverbot: Hey
You: Um… hi??? O.o)\
Cleverbot: Happy Birthday (Insert name)
You: ??? Mitch?
Cleverbot: Nope
You: Who is this?
Cleverbot: Ben. Ben Drowned
You: Sorry I don’t know you
Cleverbot: You should
You: Why? Did I do something?! :o
Cleverbot: no hehe but I am~
            All of a sudden a boy with blond hair and black eyes with crimson red pupils comes out of the screen. You gasp moving back, the boy chuckles at your reaction “Exactly what are you…”
“Hehe your sexy nightmare~ that’s who”
my first creepypasta fanfic :p
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Student Writer
Wow I'm listening to nightcore demons with this xD awesome!!!
ohhhhh SEXY nightmare

Awesomekiller352 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
trancylover Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
KittyYOUKAI5125 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Artist
AWWWWWW YESH!!!! >^*3*^<
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
“Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~”



xD Does lines Dood Pikachu Piff Plz Pikachu Giggle Plz Pikachu-lol Stitch clap plz Bunnyclapplz 
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
You guys earned a watcher, (Slaps watcher button with face) Owwwwwwwwww! (lelz, i litterally did that, Touchscreen computer)
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
omg thats so fuunny but aaw is ur face okay xD nd thhhhx Cx
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Yea im good now!!!!!! Now my knee hurts from being a goalie in soccer in gym...... I HATE SOCCAH!!!!!!!!
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