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BEN Drowned x Reader part 1 Messing~

              MITCH POV (Your older brother AKA)
Today was my little sister’s (Insert name) birthday. I have been waiting in my room to be called downstairs for the cake, normally I would be bored but I had company. “B4!” yelled a boy with golden hair and red eyes, with black lines descending from them. I meet this boy when I was twelve; at first he was trying to kill me. Frowning I groan in annoyance, and mutter lowly “you destroyed my last ship” The boy laughs,” Hehe! Okay Mitch! You owe me … eh just get me more clothes kay,” the boy leans back on my pillows. “Yeah yeah whatever Ben,” I wave my hands in annoyance “I swear I bet you’re cheating somehow…” Ben chuckles quietly “Nah~ Just luck and brains. Not to mention my good looks,”
                  I roll my eyes, turning on my back. Staring at the ceiling, allowing the blood to rush to my head. “My sister is turning fourteen today…” I mumble thinking of when she was just a tiny baby. “Heh how they grow fast” Ben snorts “Huh! What about me ! You didn’t think about me on my birthday dude! Freaking seventeen now! But happy birthday to your sister… maybe I’ll mess around with her …”Ben smirks, I instantly sit up and glare at him “Ben! You leave my sister alone kay.” Ben yawns,” Alright alright. King Bossy” I was so confused with Ben’s personality switches, one minute he’s acting like his age. Next minute he’s acting like a five year old “Hey Ben?” “Yeah Mitch?” “Were you dropped on your head as a baby?” I smile, Ben bursts into laughter giving me a gently push “No! haha Why would you even say that!”
                    Ten minutes pasted of total silence, Ben chuckles lowly. “Hey Mitch turn around” I wished I never turned around…
POV Reader~
               You were turning fourteen today! You were so excited and just plain happy. Even though you still felt thirteen you still had fun, your parents and cousins came over and as always your brother locks himself in his room. But it was all good because he would always wake up before the crack of dawn, so he could be the first to say,” Happy Birthday!” too you. He even got you gifts, like candy and a new video game. Today he gave you a poster of an anime you been watching for a while, Elfen Lied. Pride and happiness overwhelms you as you stare at the hot pink poster of Lucy and Nana.
                   Time to cut the cake was approaching; you walk down the hall way to see your brother. So you can tell him it was time. Your hand ready to knock his door, but you heard a voice. “Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~” “AAHUGH WHAT THE HELL BEN! TAKE THAT OFF! ARE THOSE!” you hear thrashing around “MMMMMMM! GIMME A BIIIIIIG WEEEET KISSSSSSS MITCH~~~~” that same voice replies with amusement in his voice. Your body stiffens and hand trembles, your right eye half way closed as you crocked your eyebrows. “Whaaaat….?” You softly whisper.
                   “Mitch?” you ask out, knocking the door. Silence filled the room, your brother opening the door slowly “Heheehe… sorry (Insert name) yeah?” he was clearly nervous, his shirt messy and not to mention hair. “Do you have a friend over?” you ask innocently, hoping you were just hearing things. “Um… no? Why do you ask?” he was clearing lying now! “Just wondering… Anyways it’s time to cut the cake,” “Oh alright. Come on lets go then.” He holds your hand, walking you back.
                  You look back once, you could of swore you saw something in his room…
~~~~~~~~ Time skip~~~~~~~~
        Everyone was asleep besides you. You couldn’t sleep… you were too worried about Mitch. You sink into your bed, opening your laptop. Someone was messaging you.
Cleverbot: Hey
You: Um… hi??? O.o)\
Cleverbot: Happy Birthday (Insert name)
You: ??? Mitch?
Cleverbot: Nope
You: Who is this?
Cleverbot: Ben. Ben Drowned
You: Sorry I don’t know you
Cleverbot: You should
You: Why? Did I do something?! :o
Cleverbot: no hehe but I am~
            All of a sudden a boy with blond hair and black eyes with crimson red pupils comes out of the screen. You gasp moving back, the boy chuckles at your reaction “Exactly what are you…”
“Hehe your sexy nightmare~ that’s who”
my first creepypasta fanfic :p
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:iconsandy345:
Sandy345 Featured By Owner 12 hours ago  Hobbyist Artist
I was dropped on my head as a baby
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YumaDarkAngel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
XD can`t stop laughing
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bshadow13 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Um for the marry me bit was BEN on crack? hehe your sexy nightmare that's who. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. LOL
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syanne69 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, He was trying to get you away from the door and stop you from opening. People with common sense don't walk in when your brother's having a lime with a their significant other named Ben... Unless you like to mess with your brother, then Ben "Shouldn't have done that"
It was funny though
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bshadow13 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
The picture at the top is dark link not Ben drowned
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Student Artist
lol Were you dropped on your head as a baby?
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wow I'm listening to nightcore demons with this xD awesome!!!
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creepypastalemonlove Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohhhhh SEXY nightmare




NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Awesomekiller352 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
I was dyeing when ben said MMMMMMMMMMM GIMME A BIG FAT KISSSSSSSSSSS MITCH!!!!
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trancylover Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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FearMehNow Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*you
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:iconkittyyoukai5125:
KittyYOUKAI5125 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Artist
AWWWWWW YESH!!!! >^*3*^<
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:iconpikachu-jenna:
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
“Mitch~ Will you marry meeeee~”

“MMMMMMM! GIMME A BIIIIIIG WEEEET KISSSSSSS MITCH~~~~”

“Whaaaat….?”

xD Does lines Dood Pikachu Piff Plz Pikachu Giggle Plz Pikachu-lol Stitch clap plz Bunnyclapplz 
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LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
heheh
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:iconpikachu-jenna:
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
You guys earned a watcher, (Slaps watcher button with face) Owwwwwwwwww! (lelz, i litterally did that, Touchscreen computer)
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LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
omg thats so fuunny but aaw is ur face okay xD nd thhhhx Cx
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:iconpikachu-jenna:
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Yea im good now!!!!!! Now my knee hurts from being a goalie in soccer in gym...... I HATE SOCCAH!!!!!!!!
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014  Student General Artist
same! I suck butt at soccer xD since im terrified of the ball
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:iconpikachu-jenna:
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
xD aahahahhahaha!!! my bff hides behind me during sportz cuz shes scared of the ball!
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:iconsomepplz:
SomePplz Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Dat Pikachu dough bro...Imma be him fo' Hallow's Eve
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:iconpikachu-jenna:
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014
xD
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:iconshindathekitsune:
ShindaTheKitsune Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Not a nightmare. Totally a dream.
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
best dream EVVVVEER
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DarkPRINCESS1015 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
I KEEP LAUGHING ABOUT MITCH AND HIM AND THE SEXY NIGHTMARE PART Hhahahahaha
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
XD happy to make u life i really want this to be a romance,comedy,drama series
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hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
"Your sexy nightmare"

*giggles* o-okay
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
heh more like sexy dream
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
birthday girl: exactley who are you...

ben: hehe your sexy nightmare.... thats who

XDXD THAT WAS MY FAVORITE PART!!!
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
lol yeeeesh
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
YASS
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:iconjedwa123:
jedwa123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
what the heck BEN?!? I'm 14, you're 17! I see a big problem there.... '~'
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sparklerthesableye Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omfg pedophilia much
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:iconjedwa123:
jedwa123 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Yup...
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Ben: Psssh age is just a # Love
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:iconjedwa123:
jedwa123 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Da fuq is wrong wit chu?









Perv...
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puppiesgorawr Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What did ben have???? Im so confused *-*
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student General Artist
oh r u confused when Ben was playing around with Mitch xD
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014   Writer
BEN: *starts coming out screen* 
Me: *overly happy* I LOVE YOU ^(^o^)^
BEN: ... *slowly backs into screen*
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LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014
;-; BEN WHY U LEAVE!? **tugs him out** CAHM BACK SHEMPAI
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TrueVenturianGirl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Artist
LAWL I WOULD DO THE SAME!
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LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
xD Ben mission to scare u failed xD 
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FrostLover1204 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*looks over and sees Cleverbot open* Smiles intently* I LOVE THIS!!!!
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student General Artist
heh thx~~~!
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:iconfrostlover1204:
FrostLover1204 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome!
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Emerald2001 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist
That ending tho 'Your Sexy Nightmare~that's who
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:iconlaylayjoan98:
LaylayJoan98 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student General Artist
ik x)
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:iconemerald2001:
Emerald2001 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist
I laugh so hard
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Talya-Serket Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
Sexy nightmare?
If you weren´t so shooooort, maaaybe~
I mean Dinky is hot :3
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ILoveXReader Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Dinky? what do you mean by that?
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Talya-Serket Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Dark Link~
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